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When the Devil Writes

by Will Raven

In the spirit of the Halloween season, here’s a new short story with a spooky twist.

Jack Fowler stared at the blank screen and prayed the words would come. He sipped on black coffee and began nervously tapping his left foot on the oak floorboards.

The rain pitter-pattering on the window intensified a hangover brought on by swigging gin from a bottle all night. He was slowly drinking himself to death.

Jack remembered little about the hours before he awoke. His head felt like tiny jackhammers were chiseling away at his brain. He sat slouched over his laptop, restless and confused.

He rubbed his deep-lined forehead and looked back at the monitor. Still no words. Writer’s block, he feared, had stifled his imagination once again. In frustration, he began typing randomly.

To his dismay, nothing appeared on the screen. He struck more keys, but got the same result.

“Piece of junk!” he yelled, pounding his right fist on the desk. He rebooted the computer, hoping it was just a glitch. Waiting for the machine to power up, his mind filled with self-doubt.

I’m a pitiful drunk, he thought, And I will never publish again.

Fifteen years ago, just 32-years-old, Jack wrote a best-selling horror novel, “Dancing on My Grave.” He has yet to finish another book. Young and foolish, he lost a small fortune on a series of bad real estate deals. His drinking and gambling in Vegas didn’t help either. His feats of boozing clouded his judgment and his addictions drained his bank account.

Suddenly, Jack heard a knock on the door. It was the landlord, Alice Quimby. For the past two years, Jack rented a room in her three-story Victorian home in rural Maryland. He liked the quiet living quarters and country scenery. He hoped to recapture his writing form there.

Mrs. Quimby felt safe when Jack was around. She loved the fact that she housed a once popular author.

“Come in,” Jack said, forgetting Mrs. Quimby was confined to a wheelchair. He moved quickly to open the door.

At 77 years old, Mrs. Quimby was all skin and bones. She wore black-rimmed glasses and had a lazy left eye that sometimes twitched when she got nervous. Despite her limitations, she still cooked her own meals and managed her own affairs.

“I heard loud noises,” she said, entering the room.

“That was me,” Jack said. “I’m having trouble with my laptop and it just—”

Alice interrupted. “I never liked those bloody computers, anyway. In my day, we always used trusty typewriters.”

Jack flashed a grin. He recalled in college how the keys on his old typewriter constantly got stuck hammering out stories for the literary magazine.

He walked back to check on the laptop. He flicked his fingers across a row of keys. The screen remained void.

“I think my laptop has fried,” Jack said. “It’s toast.”

“That’s too bad. How long have you had it?”

“About six years and I never got a damn thing published with it.”

“This may sound old fashioned,” Mrs. Quimby said. “But how would you like to use a typewriter instead?”

“You gotta be kidding,” Jack said, shutting down the laptop.

“No, I’m serious. There’s an old manual typewriter in the basement.”

“Does it still work?”

“I bet it does” Mrs. Quimby said. “But I want to be straight with you.”

“Straight about what?” Jack said.

“That typewriter has got some bad blood.”

The horror writer in Jack wanted to know more. He leaned in closer.

“My late husband typed his suicide note using that thing,” Mrs. Quimby said grimly.

Jack winced. But he remained curious like someone slowing down to see a car wreck.

“Very tragic,” he said.

“And before that he used it to write obits for the wire services.”

“So he was a journalist?”

“Before he hanged himself right in this very room. I came home one night after playing cards with some friends. There Henry was, hanging from the ceiling,” she said, pointing to a large wooden beam that ran horizontally across the center arch.

“Awful,” Jack said. His head throbbed.

“And just like me, that old typewriter’s been gathering dust ever since.”

“It must have been devastating.”

“Isn’t life a big joke anyway and the joker always gets us in the end?” Mrs. Quimby said, sounding like a fortune teller.

“Life’s definitely got its wild cards,” Jack quipped.

“You know I’m a big fan of yours, Jack. So if you think that typewriter might do you some good, by all means use it.”

“I suppose it can’t hurt to take a look,” Jack said.

“Just be careful,” Mrs. Quimby warned. “It’s been quite some time since anyone has been in the basement.”

Alice spun her motorized wheelchair around and rolled back to her room. She moved about the house pretty well and used the stair lift when she needed to go floor-to-floor.

Should I do this?, Jack debated. He quickly concluded that he didn’t have enough money to buy a new laptop and change might do him good.

He headed to the basement. As he approached the door, he thought about the times his mother told him not to go in the cellar as monsters lurked there. He squeezed the brass knob. The door was unlocked, and he gently opened it. The hinges creaked. He stared into the darkness and the darkness stared back at him.

Jack turned on the lights and poked his head inside. Two low-hanging pendant lamps flickered before one gave out. He glanced at the support poles and electrical wires that lined the ceiling.

He started down the rickety wooden stairs, waving off cob webs in his path with one hand and tightly gripping the railing with the other.

A rat scattered across the floor at the base of the steps. The creepy space was cluttered with boxes, assorted junk, and personal belongings that the Quimby’s had collected over the years.

Jack’s eyes were drawn to the center of the basement. Perched atop several crates was the typewriter—a vintage red Olympia machine. He guessed it might be a 1960s model. It was covered with dust, but it looked in good condition.

An aged sheet of paper was inserted in the cylinder. The carriage was flush left, seemingly waiting for someone to come along and type.

Jack’s eyes widened as he read a single line of type.

“I can help you.”

The sentence rattled Jack. He believed the words spoke directly to him. He wondered who had written the text when Mrs. Quimby said the typewriter sat idle for many years.

Curious, Jack typed a reply. The keys worked perfectly. The ribbon had mostly dried up, but still left a faint impression.

“How can you help me?”

Jack really didn’t expect a response and he didn’t get one. Oddly, something about the typewriter touched his soul. He felt a peculiar bond with the metal box.

Perhaps it was the eerie message that seemed to speak to him. Or maybe the clickity clack tranquilized him. He imagined recapturing his literary magic. Fame and fortune would surely follow.

Jack heard a rat squeal, snapping him out of his fantasy. Time to leave, he thought. But not without the typewriter.

Next to the machine was a small metal box containing a typewriter ribbon. Jack put it in his pocket and then lifted the typewriter with both arms. He quickly remembered how heavy the old manuals are compared to laptops.

Jack hauled the machine up to the main floor. The weight put added pressure on the aging staircase. The wood groaned with each step. Reaching the top, he gasped for air. Exhausted, he climbed the steep master stairway to the landing, then waddled toward his room.

His arms nearly gave out. Grunting, he double-clutched the typewriter and held on until he made it to the bedroom. He plopped the machine on the desk. His heart pounded. Shortness of breath.

Jack stepped over to the liquor cabinet. He opened a bottle of gin and took several swigs. It seemed to calm his nerves. He started daydreaming again.

The typewriter is my ticket back. No more writer’s block. I’m gonna be rich.

Jack yanked the paper out of the typewriter and tucked it in the desk drawer. He removed the old ribbon and replaced it with the new one. He drank another shot of gin, then opened a fresh ream of paper. He loaded a new sheet and smiled.

Now the words will come, he thought. For months, Jack had a concept for a novel in his head.

A cold, calculating tenant had bonded with his landlord—a wealthy, old widow—for years and plots to kill the woman for her inheritance. But that’s where the story had always stalled.

What method does the murderer use and what happens next?

Jack put his fingers over the home row keys. He felt an urge to type. Yet, like so many times before, he hit a brick wall. Anxiety quickly seized him. He guzzled more gin and fast grew sleepy.

Jack passed out on the bed and slept for hours. He awoke in the dark at the sound of the typewriter.

Clickety clack. Clickety clack. Clickety clack.

The machine typed on its own as though a ghost might be pecking away on the keys.

Jack listened in disbelief. He turned on the small lamp on the nightstand.

Suddenly the clatter stopped. He stepped closer to the typewriter that seemed to beckon him. He read the fresh, mysterious words on the page.

“I can help you, Jack. Isn’t that what you need? Help getting over that dreadful writer’s block that’s driving you to drink. I can fix things in your pathetic life.”

Jack felt insulted and yet intrigued. Tottering on the brink of insanity, he typed back.

“Who or what are you?”

“I am the devil himself. But don’t be alarmed. I’ve got a really sweet deal for you, if you do it right?”

“Why don’t you show yourself?”

“I think it’s best that we communicate this way.”

Jack still couldn’t believe he was having a conversation with a phantom typewriter, much less Satan.

“So what are we talking about here?”

“I am talking about you becoming a best-selling author again. But you’ll have to perform a little deed in return. What do you say?”

The page had quickly filled with type. Then magically the paper rolled out of the typewriter. It flipped face down on the desk. A new page rel